Clause Redraft
Overview
This skill helps users rewrite unclear, ambiguous, or potentially risky contract clauses into clearer, more balanced language. It provides alternative wording while preserving the intended meaning.
⚠️ Important Disclaimer: This tool provides drafting assistance only. It does not constitute legal advice, nor does it replace professional legal counsel. Always consult a qualified attorney before finalizing contract language.
When to Use This Skill
- - A clause seems unclear or ambiguous
- Language feels one-sided or unbalanced
- You want more professional contract wording
- Translating informal agreements into formal contract language
- Simplifying overly complex legal jargon
Limitations
- - Only provides suggested alternatives, not definitive language
- Cannot assess enforceability under specific jurisdictions
- May not capture all nuances of the original intent
- Not a substitute for professional legal drafting
Workflow
- 1. Receive clause text — User provides the clause to be redrafted
- Identify issues — Analyze for ambiguity, imbalance, or unclear language
- Generate alternatives — Provide 2-3 alternative versions with different approaches
- Explain changes — Describe what was changed and why
- Suggest review — Recommend attorney review for important clauses
Redraft Approaches
Approach 1: Balanced (Recommended)
- - Fair to both parties
- Clear obligations for each side
- Reasonable protections
Approach 2: Protective (Favorable to you)
- - Stronger protections for your interests
- Still reasonable and enforceable
- May require negotiation
Approach 3: Simple (Plain language)
- - Removes unnecessary legalese
- Easier to understand
- May sacrifice some precision
Common Redraft Scenarios
Payment Terms
Before: "Payment due upon completion"
After: "Payment due within 30 days of invoice date or within 10 days of acceptance of deliverables, whichever is earlier."
Termination
Before: "Either party may terminate this agreement at any time."
After: "Either party may terminate this agreement with 30 days written notice. Upon termination, Client shall pay for all work completed through the termination date."
Confidentiality
Before: "All information is confidential forever."
After: "Confidential Information shall be held in confidence for a period of 3 years from disclosure, except for trade secrets which shall be protected indefinitely."
Liability
Before: "Company is not responsible for anything."
After: "Company's total liability shall not exceed the total amount paid by Client under this agreement in the 12 months preceding the claim."
Usage
Basic Redraft
CODEBLOCK0
With Context
CODEBLOCK1
Output Format
For each redraft request:
- - Original: The clause as provided
- Issues Identified: What's problematic about the original
- Alternative 1 - Balanced: Fair version
- Alternative 2 - Protective: Version favoring your interests
- Alternative 3 - Simple: Plain language version
- Recommendation: Which version to consider and why
References
For redrafting templates and patterns, see:
Privacy Note
Clause content is processed for redrafting only. No content is stored or transmitted to third parties.
条款重拟
概述
本技能帮助用户将不清晰、有歧义或存在潜在风险的合同条款重写为更清晰、更平衡的语言。它在保留原意的前提下提供替代措辞。
⚠️ 重要免责声明:本工具仅提供起草协助。它不构成法律建议,也不能替代专业法律咨询。在最终确定合同语言前,请务必咨询合格律师。
使用场景
- - 条款表述不清或存在歧义
- 语言表述偏向一方或不够平衡
- 希望获得更专业的合同措辞
- 将非正式协议转化为正式合同语言
- 简化过于复杂的法律术语
局限性
- - 仅提供建议性替代方案,非最终确定语言
- 无法评估在特定司法管辖区内的可执行性
- 可能无法完全捕捉原始意图的所有细微差别
- 不能替代专业法律起草
工作流程
- 1. 接收条款文本 — 用户提供需要重拟的条款
- 识别问题 — 分析是否存在歧义、不平衡或表述不清
- 生成替代方案 — 提供2-3种不同思路的替代版本
- 解释修改内容 — 说明修改了什么及修改原因
- 建议审查 — 建议重要条款由律师审查
重拟方法
方法一:平衡版(推荐)
方法二:保护版(对您有利)
- - 对您的利益提供更强保护
- 仍保持合理且可执行
- 可能需要谈判
方法三:简化版(通俗语言)
- - 去除不必要的法律术语
- 更易于理解
- 可能牺牲部分精确性
常见重拟场景
付款条款
修改前:完工后付款
修改后:应在发票开具之日起30日内或交付物验收后10日内付款,以较早者为准。
终止条款
修改前:任何一方可随时终止本协议。
修改后:任何一方可提前30天书面通知终止本协议。终止时,客户应支付截至终止日已完成的所有工作费用。
保密条款
修改前:所有信息永久保密。
修改后:保密信息自披露之日起保密3年,但商业秘密应永久保护。
责任条款
修改前:公司对任何事项概不负责。
修改后:公司的总责任不超过客户在索赔发生前12个月内根据本协议支付的总金额。
使用方法
基本重拟
帮我改写这个条款
这句话怎么写更清楚
优化一下这个条款
附带背景
我是乙方,帮我改一下这个条款
这个条款太偏向甲方了,改平衡一点
用简单的话重说一遍
输出格式
每次重拟请求:
- - 原文:提供的条款
- 识别的问题:原文存在的问题
- 替代方案1 - 平衡版:公平版本
- 替代方案2 - 保护版:有利于您利益的版本
- 替代方案3 - 简化版:通俗语言版本
- 建议:推荐考虑哪个版本及原因
参考资料
有关重拟模板和模式,请参阅:
隐私说明
条款内容仅用于重拟处理。不会存储或传输给第三方。